Sunday, May 12, 2013

His View

His View is a poem that I wrote as a love poem in my creative writing class. It shows the point of view from a man who is proposing to his girlfriend.  This poem has no rhyme scheme.


His View
Heart beating,
Perspiration falls down my neck,
Hands shaking,
Butterflies soar in my stomach.
Her hair is perfect,
Falling lightly on her shoulders,
Her eyes look like the shining sea,
Everything is perfect.
I feel the box sitting,
Resting upon my chest,
Thumping along with my heart,
Nothing will ruin this night,
My fingers tingle as I reach for her,
Taking her hand in mine,
I feel her shake too.
Breathe in,
Breathe out,
Nothing is more important than this,
I hear the word that she whispers,
Yes.

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