Sunday, May 12, 2013

The Story of Maximus

The Story of Maximus was based off of the original story of Rapunzel.  In my creative class we had to pick a fairytale and re-write it.  This is my re-written version.

The Story of Maximus

Once upon a time…
                  In a far off land, sat a boy.  Young to the eyes but ages old to the soul.  He sat watching out a window, a tiny little frame, where he saw birds flying across the blue sky.  He was but 12 years old and already he had the makings of a beard. His shaggy blonde hair hung in front of his eyes making him look scared and innocent.  His frame was slender and his legs were long.
            Looking up from the window he looked around his room, covered in paintings and drawings of the things he liked the most.  His bed was made and his ground was covered in papers from everything he had written.  He had just gone to his bed when he heard a singsong voice come from below his window,  “Oh Maximus dear let down the ladder.”  Maximus rushed to the window where he dropped down the ladder.
            Waiting and watching Maximus knew who was coming up but never forgot how beautiful she was.  Gold hair appeared first, then the makings of a face, and later the rest of her body.  Maximus sat watching as she climbed into his tower and knew that he would never love anyone more than he loved her.  She smiled at him and his heart broke.
            “Maximus!” She exclaimed with a gleeful smile, “Look what I brought for us.”  She showed him her basket, which was filled with a cherry and apple pie, with a container of milk and a couple of sweeties.  Maximus beamed at her and they sat on his paper-covered floor and munched on pies and sweeties while drinking in each other’s presence.
            Everything was as peaceful as could be until he heard the sounds of someone climbing the tower.  Maximus looked at the beautiful girl beside him and saw that her expression matched his.  She dove to pick up everything but just as she started to move she saw a boot come through the window.  Old dame Gothel climbed through the window with her steel-toed boots and long black cape, looking as if to be the most evil human being to ever walk the earth.  Once inside the tower Gothel’s eyes seized the girl.  Gothel hissed beneath her breath and said to Maximus, “How dare you betray me, sneak a girl in here, now see what happens to her.” 
            Gothel walked towards the girl and seized her hair as if it were a rope.  She led the girl to the window where she looked at Maximus and exclaimed, “This will teach you and anyone else who were to enter here, a lesson.”  The girl who was sobbing into her hands repeated, “No please, no.”  Maximus just sat there watching, as the girl he loved was about to die.
            Just as Gothel was pushing the girl out of the window, Maximus leaped forward and grabbed the girls hand.  The force of the push was too much though, and both went flying out the window.  They wrapped themselves in each other’s arms and fell together.  They hit the ground still wrapped in each other’s arms, where they would stay for the rest of eternity.
The End

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